What are most people looking to buy when they go to the mall? Some might say toys, some might want appliances, some might want something entirely different, but what most people are looking for when they go to the mall are clothes. Malls should indeed offer everything for every different type of person, but the main focus of a mall should be the clothes stores. One time I was at The Natick Mall and I was looking for clothes stores to shop in, like every other time I go to the mall, when I came to a realization that there are only a few stores in the mall that I really enjoy shopping in. The Natick Mall has very good variety of different kinds of stores, but when it comes to the selection of all around excellent clothes stores, it’s not too great.
The Natick Mall does have some good clothes stores. Some of my favorites include Forever 21 and Express. Forever 21 is a great store to shop at. It has an awesome selection of clothes, and it’s rare that you ever get the same item of clothing as one of your friends. The clothes at Forever 21 are always stylish and constantly on top of the new fashion trends. Not only that, but the clothes found here are not like any other store in the mall, they are all very unique. Also everything in the store you can buy for an incredibly cheap price, and in that case keep some money in your pocket. Express is an extremely fun store to be in, from the customer service, to the appearance and organization of the clothing, everything is just right. The clothes here give your style a polished and finished appearance, and in the end make your wardrobe look just right. These are the only two stores in the whole mall that quality clothes stores.
Even though there are some decent clothes stores found in The Natick Mall, when it comes down to it, there aren’t any stores that really stand out. Even though the clothes might be fashionable and trendy, there is always something that completely covers up the positive. It might be the prices, it could be the cheapness of the material the clothes are made out of, it could even be the customer service, or the appearance of the store itself. I know nothing is perfect, but is it so hard to ask for a store that has everything right? A store that has stylish clothes made out of good materials, that are not too much money, and the store itself is organized, and the people that work there help the customers. Personally, I don’t think that is too hard to ask for at all.
The Natick Mall made a good decision in the addition of Forever 21 last summer. Not only did the mall profit from this new store by getting more money and more customers, but also the shoppers benefited too from having a good clothes store. The mall should add better clothes stores like they added Forever 21. One clothes store that the mall should definitely add to their collection is H&M. This store has many different styles of clothing for different kinds of people. Also the prices of the items are affordable for everyone. The inexpensive prices of the clothes don’t mean that the material is cheap, actually it’s the opposite; all the clothes I have bought from there have never ripped. Another store that they should add is Charlotte Russe, because it really is great, fun store. It always has the most popular clothes for the best prices, and the customer service is great. If the mall added these clothing stores then mall would make a lot more money and attract many more customers because of the fact that everyone is looking for an all around great clothing stores, and these two stores definitely are.
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Hey. Your blog voiced good opinion about the stores in the mall. I liked how you zeroed in on two specific stores that you enjoyed and described what you liked about them. There were a couple mecanical errors though, like it might sound better to say clothing stores instead of clothes stores. Also, this sentence 'A store that has stylish clothes made out of good materials, that are not too much money, and the store itself is organized, and the people that work there help the customers,' seems like an unfinished sentence. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYuor blog entry had good insights and good reasoning about the lack of good clothes store at the Natick Mall. In the sentence: "These are the only two stores in the whole mall that quality clothes stores", you need to change it to that are quality clothes stores for the sentence to make sense.
ReplyDelete"Malls should indeed offer everything for every different type of person, but the main focus of a mall should be the clothes stores." You could say Malls should offer a bigger variety for more people while still focusing on clothing.
ReplyDelete"These are the only two stores in the whole mall that quality clothes stores." I'm not sure what you are trying to say here but it's probably just a small error.
You really showed your opinion in this essay. You provided good evidense supporting your ideas and why certain stores should be included in the mall. Maybe you could send something like this to the mall to see if anything could be done about it. Great job!
What happens when you turn 22? Can you no longer shop at Forever 21?
ReplyDeleteWatch out for ending sentences with prepositions.
Run on alert! Not only that, but the clothes found here are not like any other store in the mall, they are all very unique.
Your last paragraph needs a good proofing.
Good job not just criticizing--you offer real suggestions for improvement, too.